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Sunday, September 10, 2017

The Amazing Race

The Amazing Race
By: Lorraine
Characters:  James, Amy, Jason and Kyla
James’s classmates: Joey, Briana,  Jacob and Lily

One hot and sunny day James woke up bright and early.He went downstairs to eat his delicious breakfast.After he finished he rushed back upstairs to get ready for school.When he came down he made his yummy lunch.Then he ran super fast faster than he has ever ran before.

When the bus came he rushed to sit down with Amy, Jason and Kyla.Then he told them why he was in such a rush.He said ‘‘I am is a hurry because in 1 week it is race day’’.Then his friends started to tell him that ‘‘Oh oh we forgot to train especially we forgot that it was in 1 week we thought it was next month’’.

When they got to school the teachers said to go to the field. When we got to the field the teachers told us to run around and whoever comes in 1st 2nd and 3rd will get to have extra 30 minutes on the playground.
When they ran around the field 1st came in  Joey 2nd came in Jacob 3rd came in Briana.

Then everyone else came in and James came in 9th place with his friends.When they had their lunch they played on the playground for 1 hour.When the bell rang  Joey Jacob and Briana was still playing on the playground.When school was over James walked to the school bus with his friends.

When James got home he got dressed to have a jog. When he got home he started to stretch his arms and legs to be ready for the race in 1 week. After One week of training for the race James was scared he wouldn’t beat Joey Jacob and Briana.When they started the race he ran past his friends and was in 4th place.When it was the last lap James was getting tired but suddenly he beated Briana and Jacob. The only person left for James to past was Joey.It was the final turn James was frightened he wouldn’t make it then he bet Joey right when Joey was about to cross the finish line.When James got home he excitedly ran to his parent s to tell them how the race went and he made his parents proud and James was so relieved that he came in 1st.

And They all lived Happily Ever After

The End

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